It covers the who, what, where, why, and when, of the swine flu outbreak, spreading to minnesota. it answers the how in the second paragraph.
More details are provided.
I read everthing i needed to know about the flu, I dont have anymore questions.
There isnt much he could do to improve the article.
Cory Meyer Peer review
It says the 5 W's and the H in the first paragraph.
I think he could have said more about the rest of the team besides only a few people.
I want to know more about his position on the baseball team.
He could improve this by speaking more about himself.
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