Aaron Stevens editiorial review
1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
There is a clear point, that exercising and doing activities reduces teen obesity.
2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
Yes, it has the solution of dieting and exercising to make people not lazy and fat.
3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
There is no counter arguements.
4. Is the Op-Ed interesting? Its interesting and simple, but allmost abvious.
5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
Yes they are.
6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
Yes.
7. Is the writing clear?
It is very clear.
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